—the confluence of poetry and images and occasional five minute riffs
I like this. Just a clarifying question, because I'm not sure whether the "rouge" was intentional: is it meant to be "rogue?"I live in a place with many barnacle laden rocks. Beautiful, isn't it?
Very nicely expressed!http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/six-english-haiku.html
music to my ears, visual celebration to my eyes
It is a rouge wave not a rogue wave. Sometimes when the sun is going down the color of a wave almost takes on a reddish tint.Linda
Sunset over the sea - you paint it well.
Beautiful and so well written. There's nothing I like to do more than gaze at the ocean, especially at sunset.
The "veils of white foam" is a nice image. Sunset can improve almost any scene!
I've been thinking- ever since I read the first comment about small changes-- thus the second haiku Linda Frances