—the confluence of poetry and images and occasional five minute riffs
sandpipers dance between ghostly foam
my hair coversrocks at low tide
to hear the echoes of random rhythms
Stunning, Linda. I love how your pieces bring me to the ocean again and again. This piece lulls. Thank you. ~Brenda
Oh, I enjoyed the heck out of this one!Love, love, love the randomness AND the connectedness and the format? Sheer delight. My attempt at this week's prompt.
A ghostly read.
I like the fluent yet abstract sense of this work, marked effervescent with the waters -- I love water so you drew me right in......rob
Lovely and intriguing -- a mermaid's sea song
Sensous!like an automata
Beautiful with a surreal quality!Pamela
Love the wave-like lines, and some really consistent, beautiful imagery here. Always love a good ocean/water poem.
Ditto to other people's thoughts. Stunning!
Ah, Linda...I love the way you "shaped" the poem like waves on a beach. The images were lovely, and I really liked rolling this phrase, "from anemone fingers" over and over on my tongue. Thanks!
OK, I'm a sucker for the sea, and more, how it plays music with the shore, as does your poem here. And your closing line, "water flows and covers secret places", draws the poem (and us) right in by our toes. Good job!
enjoyable. the presentation is rhythmic, but not too much so. random rhythms, I suppose.
Oh Wow Weeeeeeeee! Your poems are lovely and so are your photos to match your poems, very enjoyable to read and A for Acadia National Park is a Great A for the ABC Wednesdays.I am glad to of joined up with this art project.Thank you for visiting my blog. :)